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Give me a reason
To keep on believing
On the time we had

Day after day memories were made
Growing up side by side like siblings
Learning everything about each other, like a family
But You have lost yourself in dreaming

Our spring went by like the wind
It all started that summer
We learned alot of things that fall
And I lost something during winter

The pain, I can’t escape it
Nor explain it
Losing you was harder
Than I have ever thought

Our spring went by like the wind
It all started that summer
We learned alot of things that fall
And I lost something during winter

Taking your hand
Tries to bring you back
You're slipping through my fingers
I have lost you to the dreamers
something new I have done, tell me what you think of it 
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ItsKocot Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Student Writer
I like it, though the seemingly sporadic use of chorus does give it an unfinished feeling... or maybe that's my brain's way of saying that it wants more... :)
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